Synopsis:

The 'Extended Editions' of the first two Hobbit movies, combined into one streamlined fanedit, forming Part 1 of the "Ironfoot Edition".

Intentions:

My attempt has been to cut down The Hobbit films from three to two films with an eye to good solid storytelling. I believe these films to be valuable gems suffering from bloated and boring scenes that bring down the entire narrative. I’ve cut only what I found unnecessary, unsatisfactory or needed to for coherence. My source material were the Extended Editions (with 5.1 surround sound to isolate dialogue or sound effects wherever needed) and the Official OST. I have some experience with editing and I’ve done my best to make my edits seem as flawless as possible and I hope I will have succeeded in making it impossible to tell what I’ve changed without knowing the source material.

Change List:

Shorter opening: No prologue, no Frodo. However, some of those shots were used elsewhere, such as over the Misty Mountain song. ? No Radagast, White Council, Stone?Giants, High Fells or Dol Guldur. ? Azog has been visually cut from the first part of the duology and I've replaced the references to a sorcerer in Dol Goldur with Azog. Sauron has been removed and Azog takes his place as the (still unseen) threat in Dol Guldur. ? The eagles fly the company from the wargs straight to Beorn. ? Kili?Tauriel?Legolas love triangle removed. ? I’ve kept the cartoonish action scenes (Goblin escape and Barrel sequence), because although they take away any sense of real danger, I believe they are rather fun and creatively done. ? Composited a new shot to make for a real ending.

Additional Notes:

Opening: Flashback, Prologue, Frodo and most of the “Hey, remember Lord of the Rings?”-moments removed. Instead, Bilbo (though still addressing Frodo) jumps straight into his own story. Everything that’s important will be repeated and I want to get to the dwarves as soon as possible. - When Bilbo opens his book, the drawing of his younger self has been digitally removed (not perfectly yet) so he seems to open it solely for writing in it. - Use of the “Old Friends”-song to accompany the beginning. - Use of sounds from sound libraries and FotR (ink dipping) to compensate for the ones that got lost while drowned in music. An Unexpected Party: - The drinking-burping part has been skipped. - After Balin says “It appears we have lost our burglar.” I’ve reversed a shot of Thorin looking at Bilbo and everything after that has been cut. - Some footage of opening flashback (slightly de-saturated) has been put in over and after the Misty Mountain song (when the theme is reiterated by violins). Violin music from Taylor Davis was used for this, with permission. Inspired by the There and Back Again-cut. - When they leave the shire we go straight to the farmstead where we will meet the trolls. The first night (including the Azog & Thorin backstory and the orc spying on them), the conversation in the rain about wizards and Radagast’s first introduction have been cut. Roast Mutton: - When Thorin mentions being betrayed by the elves, we see that part of the flashback (slightly desaturated). Imitated from There and Back Again-cut. - Cut Thorin commanding Bilbo - One frame has been cut from Ori throwing his slingshot to logs being dropped, making it feel more fluent. - Talk of parasites and the ridiculous “We don’t have parasites” - “Yes we do!” part has been skipped. - Radagast cut. A Short Rest: - Used the shot with the waterfall (from whey they leave Rivendell) to make a smoother transition into the hidden valley. Because the sound of the waterfall was drowned in music, I used a different waterfall-sound as background noise. - Used the Hidden Valley-song to bridge the gap. - Trimmed Thorin's worry about the elves. - Trimmed the elves circling around the dwarves - After Elrond arrives and greets Gandalf, we cut straight to them having dinner. (Removed a subtitle that’s fading in). - Put the dwarves eating in front of Elrond asking about the blades. - Cut out Thorin’s refusal to share the map with Elrond. Instead that scene begins with Elrond inspecting the map (imitated from Kerr’s Arkenstone Edition). - White Council cut entirely. - Azog’s weathertop-scene cut. - After Elrond says Gandalf is not the only guardian of middle earth, we cut to Gandalf’s conversation with Galadriel about supporting Thorin and Bilbo giving him courage. Galadriel is deprived a more obvious entrance, but I hope Elrond’s lead in will suffice to explain her presence. - Gandalf talking about Bilbo gave me the opportunity to make a match?cut to him looking at the Rivendell he’s leaving behind. This scene goes over into them walking, rather than cutting to the Gandalf -Galadriel scene that now comes before it. Over Hill and Under Hill: - The walking shot with the waterfall?shot was cut (as mentioned previously). - Stone Giants removed. As soon as Bilbo loses his footing, we skip to the part afterwards, where Bilbo falls. (Imitated from The Arkenstone Edition, though I placed Thorin’s “We need to find shelter!” a bit later). - Cut another one of Azog’s “I’m coming after you.” shots. - To make the transition to them sleeping more smoothly, I used a lightning sound and made it sound like it’s coming from outside the cave they rest in instead. ? Shortened the dwarves fall to make it less ridiculous. - Cut out The Goblin King’s talk of Azog. Riddles in the Dark: - Kept every single frame of Gollum. Out of the Frying Pan into the Fire: - Digitally removed Azog from the first shot of the wargs. Not entirely flawlessly, but easy to miss. - Imitated and even lifted parts from the There and Back Again?cut to remove Azog and let it be suggested via voice?over that the eagles dropped them at Beorn’s home. However, I made Gandalf dialogue sound more from afar to match better with the eagle?shots and I’ve also made color-correction some of them to make it night, which made for a cleaner transition. Queer Lodgings: - Used the Extended Edition scene with Beorn where they each come out in pairs. - After Beorn pours some milk, we skip ahead to avoid the Azog-dialogue. - I’ve kept Beorn’s lines about these lands crawling with orcs to foreshadow the climax-attack during the battle sequence. - Used the Extended Edition scene where Beorn talks about orcs gathering in Dol Guldur, but replaced “the sorcerer” with “The Defiler”. I’ve used the word from where it has elsewhere been cut while still matching the tone of voice. This worked much better than anticipated as you never see their lips anyway. This has been done a few times in Part II as well. - I generally trimmed the EE

Other Sources:

The Hobbit - An Unexpected Journey OST - The Hobbit - Desolation of Smaug OST ? Misty Mountains - Taylor Davis - Freesound.org: waterfall, page-flip, ink-dip, lightning, owl

Special Thanks:

Dustin Lee, David Killstein, Underhill editor, Spence, samspider3, ranger613, jerick